My new song

Hi! I have composed a song. It  no has rhythm but it has really cool lyrics. Leave comments below the entry and you know, create a google account (gmail) to leave comments. These are the lyrics of my song, "Alone in the silence":

today i remembered his voice again, and i sensed that something was burning inside me, i know that time is always imposes its law, but i'm tired of waiting

Chorus: i miss you, i feel you so far from me, i have no soul in quiet without you, i'm lost, lifeless if in the end it lost, alone in the silence i am without you...

   i know it's best to leave it be, but this agony not let me breathe, i'm like a broken wrist you with your   kisses can fix

Chorus

If the destination you away from me
We seek
I'll find you
I know, I know

Chorus

Alone in the silence [x2] Mmmm yeah, without you...